Nice Guitars
The solos where great. You need to work a little more on your voice. It needs more strenght. You have a very nice voice and if you work a little more on your style I now you could get even better results as you are now. I think the lyrics needs a little more strenght, specially on the chorus. But It was a very nice song.
Listen to kamelot. Roy Khan has a low voice like yours but he has more control and balance. Check it so you get what Im talking about.